The Young

Tue, 11/13/2012 - 23:32 -- bxyang

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54303
United States
44° 32' 35.5164" N, 88° 3' 38.7252" W

He was elusive, the eye overhead
His endless glitter, embrace me
Cringed shadows. Gardens of light
Conveying prospect resilient gaze.

Behind my encasement,
Indolent winds grow fainter the sky,
I am lost. A becoming
Perhaps death, colors fade away.
The hands of time flaccid wilt.
Days void of warmth and comfort
Hasten. Indifference nears
Time passes. Stone-quiet
Beauty renowned.

Flowers bloomed in your presence
I understand. Bright as fire,
Phoenix in flight.

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