You told me you loved me...

Mon, 11/19/2012 - 22:55 -- Jadyn

You told me you loved me,
that you'd never love another.
But lookey here,
now I talk to my brother.
You're never here
so now I'm gone.
Forget about me,
I'll talk to Jon.

You told me you loved me
so now I'm crying.
But what you don't know
is that I'm truly dying.
You don't care
that I'm dead.
I took that bullet
and put it through my head.

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