You said.

Shoot for the stars, and you'll land on the moon,
You said,
But shoot for the mud puddle and you'll hit dead center,
You said.
Why did you say that?
You said.
Do you know what you want to do with your life?
You said.
Why don't you do something?
You said.
Don't just sit there,
You said.
Don't cry,
You said.
Don't ask Questions,
You said.
Grow up,
You said.
Get a life,
You said.
Maybe if you try this,
You said.
Man up,
You said.
Maybe if you didn't goof around,
You said.
Maybe if you'd washed your hands,
You said.
Maybe if you'd been more confident.
You said.
MAYBE IF YOU'D BEEN RESPECTFUL
You said.

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