you broke me

Tue, 08/14/2012 - 14:38 -- Cece22

you broke me im not afraid no tears and cries, i am broken by you as u stomp me into no more, you broke me when i gave you my all me, you broke me when i agree with not plea to do as you please you broke me into a shatter of pieces can you repair me? you broke me try to fix me i fall apart where should you start you broke me you broke me can you least try to repair me

Comments

dolvas

This one brought a tear to my eye.. painfull ... is this really you?

Cece22

this is for girl that get pregnant and feel alone

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