Working title 7

My life has always been very noisy
Yet we always walked together
My eldest brother would shout
Yet I listened
My senior brother would be loud
Yet I laughed
My mother would scream
Yet I smiled
My father would curse
Yet I forgave
My eldest sister would command
Yet I misunderstand
My senior sister would scold
Yet I disobeyed
My junior sister complained
Yet I disregarded
My baby sister refused
Yet I supported
We all walked together
Until my eldest brother began to yell
Which turned to pain
And he ran
My senior brother became silent
And he sat
My eldest sister began to cry
And she ran
Yet some still walk together
Until mother will plant roses in her spare time
And father will plant beans in his spare time
And senior sister will run
And junior sister will run
And baby sister will run
Until my life is silent
And I walk alone in silence

This poem is about: 
Me
My family

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