Awesome imagery! It's hard to pick a favorite line, but I really like "It sing a breeze of loneliness" because this line manages to play on multiple senses with both imagery and sounds. Have you thought about making a sequel or companion poem? This poem focuses on nature, and it would be cool to get the perspective of the soul the wind takes, too. Just a thought! Meanwhile, have you ever written an ode poem? Check out how and more in the Resources section!