The Wind of Dreams

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You teasingly brush my cheek,
igniting hope in my heart.

I stretch out my palms
and raise my arms,
in attempts to keep you within my grasps.
But these hands are too small,
and these limbs too incompetent
to hold you in my embrace.

Nonetheless, like a fool,
I continue running,
breatheless at each step,

hoping

to one day

fly beside you

in the endless skys above.

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Petravovskaya

That's a really great poem! If iwere you though I'de get way more emotional with it as people connect more with emotions than actions.

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