why did you die?

Location

91321
United States
34° 22' 3.7812" N, 118° 28' 28.9812" W

Sadness, depression
At night the moon glowing
can't sleep missing you.
why did you leave me?
Why did you go?
crying in pain can't take it anymore.
You were the world to me.
I cry day and night
but you don't come back.
I screamed your name!
But you didn't responded.
tears rolling down my cheeks
why?
please come back!
Can't live with out you.
Don't you realize how much I miss you!
how much I care!
please come back!!!
But I guess you don't care.
why?

Comments

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

oh wow

very heartbreaking as i read it

i'm sure there are people that relate to this poem

very powerful piece

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