why did i do it?

Fri, 11/02/2012 - 00:48 -- chytkaj

Everything became a blur, as you said those words
My heart started to break, and the pain just wouldn't stop
I tried to fight through it, but the pain was to much
Now as I lay here and look up from this wooden box
All I see is my friends and family around me crying
There you were, asking me why I did it
I ment the world to you
I can't believe I took my own life
As I lay there trying to speak, nothing could come out
I see a bright light, but I'm to young and not ready to leave this world
I ask myself as I leave this world
Why did I shoot myself, and leave all my loved ones behind

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