Who I Am

Location

92804
United States
33° 49' 24.708" N, 117° 57' 57.2544" W

I am but a slave.

A slave who is pulled left

And tugged right.

A slave who goes which ever way the heavenly wind blows.

A slave. I have no free will.

A slave. I follow your plan and never sway.

I am but a slave.

Oh you! Who is my master,

bless me with common ground!

I am a slave to you.

Comments

powerful.imani

SPEECHLESS this message is very breath taking ,amazing job once again . I love how you used it like a slave very excellent work . I would love to hear more of your poetry .

check out my poetry and hopefully it inspire you and others 

keep on writing and reaching for your dream

mangocaulfield

This is such a beautiful/sad poem, I kind of can't believe it exists

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