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How uncertain I felt about my thoughts.

When this metal structure slid through my skin.

The feeling of blood trickling down my arm felt extravagant.

It almost felt like I had escaped from this terrible world.

As the blood dimmed.

 I began to sob.

The extravagant feeling was now gone.

All I had left was the metal structure that slid through my skin.

 

My body started to tremble.

As the conclusion was now closer than ever.

I was able to attain the pill box sitting close to me.

I unbolted the box that did not say my name on it.

Five did not seem to pleasure me, neither did ten

I was sure that twenty tablets would end me.

And I was right.

 

I began to feel the sensation.

This feeling was finer than the metal structure that approached my skin several minutes ago.

I am now able to feel my inner organs diminish as minutes go by.

My vision became weakened.

As I pass to the floor.

My thoughts were now certain.

My problems have now vanished.

And I am now left to pass from sight.

 

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