When you took your last breath

When you took your last breath
You took mine with you

When your heart stopped beating
Mine lost the will to keep going

When the light left your eyes
You took mine with it

When they buried you in the ground
I fell in with you
And for 7 months I have been suffocating

When you died
I died with you

This poem is about: 
Me

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