when we kissed

when he kissed me i couldnt breath, the wind stop blowing through the trees sending weakness to my knees. when he kissed me my blood started to freeze. when he kissed me my heart tried to excape through my breast and land on his chest.when he kissed me i felt soft feathers around my head i opened my eyes and i was in bed, aaaaahhhh i wanted to scream, the kiss was only a dream

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