When the Water Runs Out

 

her body is an ocean

my body is a puddle

 

come here come play with me

 

splahsplashlaughsplash

 

and then that’s all there is

 

she goes on forever

never leave her

Comments

Grant-Grey Porter Hawk Guda

8 years ago

Powerful expression. Always let poetry fill your life. Keep expressing your heart.  

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