When the Knot at the End of Your Rope Isn't Enough

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84043
United States
40° 24' 48.9672" N, 111° 53' 33.468" W

swinging on life's rope swing
someone tried to shove me off
tied a knot and kept swinging
harsh words started cutting into rope
rope's starting to fray and snap
going to fall
ground's too far away to see
landing will hurt
what do i do
if i can't hold on to my life

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