What's Wrong ?

 I'm sitting here studying this beautiful rose .

 It looks as it has some kinda pose ,straight up it stands ,

no drips , no bends . It looks happy now , but why is it red ?
 
Where did it come from ?, Where did it land ?

Was it's petals once lost in the sand ? What has it been through ?

Could it be pain ? , I see it now just blowing in the rain .. Silence is what i hear.

Nothing's like a dreadful fear.

What's Wrong ?
 

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