What Would I Change

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Murders

Taking a life brings so much pain and hurt

Discrimination 

God made us all different colors and sizes to make us unique, not to make one more superior over the other 

Cheating in a relationship

there is no point in a relationship if you are not worthy of being faithful 

Prices

How do you suspect a healthy functioning society when majority of us can't afford the things offered to us 

Life 

As humans we want to expererience the great things in this world and need the opportunity to seek these things before we're long gone

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