What Would Be The Point

If I were to complain,

whine, or moan

Would it make a difference?

Would there be a point?

Does matter if I say 

My life may have been better

Had things gone this way

Or that way?

If I were to whine 

and say everything is not fine

or I wish I could just press rewind.

Would it in fact turn back time

Or change your stalwart mind?

What would be the point 

If I sat here and cried 

Bitched and bemoaned my life?

After all I will be fine 

Aren't I still alive

I am still here 

I can still fight 

I can still breathe and move 

And have a will to survive

So what would be the point

If I were to complain or whine?

I mean really aren't I still alive?

So, what would be the point?

This poem is about: 
Me
My family
My community
My country
Our world

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