what make me feel.................

the moment you rise to bring fourth life with your love.streatching  like the beam from the sun hitting the dark to bring fourth life from up above.the rain drop god give, you give on a leafe to bring moister in the winter time for a dew for me to enjoy,As cool as the steam creating a cloud when i talk,cuzz its that cold out side.More like a butter fly breaking from its cocoon.so it could fly to its  secreat destanation where no one can find.doing what i love most you chang my mode like a pinky wring on a warm day in the winter time.its you that makes me feel this way im so inspired that i cant say.what makes me feel this good with out wanting to be a child and play all day long so do your thang and keep me feeling good all night long.

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Abram Garcia

this is the reason why i feel good every thing that makes me laugh or cry out of this god life abram garcia player the poet gangster

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