What is love?

Is love sweet?

Is it soft and light?

Could such a thing truly make you blind?

To truth, to life and honesty

And even love for your family

I fear and doubt the wonders of love

Yet . . .

I do look back

Many times . . .

In a bittersweet lacing there’s yearning

Bittersweet indeed . . .

 

This poem is about: 
Me
Our world

Comments

MT inside

Good job 👏 My feedback though, try experimenting with separating your lines 

like

this. If you know what I mean :)

Adventure_cat

Hi MT inside, thanks so much for replying, you don't know how excited I got! Also how can I do so? I have tried but unfortunately have been unable to for some weird reason. When I try it comes out altogether for some reason. 

Adventure_cat

MT, I think I did it :D

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