What I Would Change
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The human mind can deceive and destroy
It can believe that your worth is no more than a mere toy
It can convince the heart that healing is untrue
That emotional survival is preserved for a select few
It can imagine a life of joy and peace as out of reach
For the ones that claim such a life are just wishing to preach
It can taunt to the point of destruction and instability
Causing a belief that you have no worth-while ability
It can creep the belief of insignificance into your being
Until worthlessness and taking your own life is all you are seeing
It can thirst for a substance that will destroy your skin
As if alcohol, drugs, or separation from reality is the only way to win
This I would change
So every beautiful soul on earth could see their potential
How their presence and their entity is entirely essential
So their minds are wiped clean of being hurt and broken
For life should be treasured and they are a valuable token
So that every woman can be free in her untainted skin
Because understanding their immense beauty is when the joy of life will begin
So that every man will be proud of what he can provide
And that the demons pulling him down will all subside
I would change the mind, and wipe it clean