What to Do?

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When Hell is closer than its s’posed to be
Where can you run?
When happiness is only a dream
How do you live on a daily basis?
When sadness turns to depression
What can you do to change it back?
When everyday gets you farther away from hell
Why does everyday get worst and worst?
When that place away from hell is place of peace and serenity
Why is today and yesterday so dismal?
When the one who says they care for you is lying
What can you do but deal with it?
When death is knocking on your door with his hand out
Do you grab it and go with him or live in misery?
When death is knocking on your door with his hand out
Do you go with him or do you slam the door in his face and beat him to the point?

Comments

jwiener

Asking questions in a poem is a great way to get the reader thinking! Nice technique! Check out "poetry writing tips" in the "resources" section of the site for great tips and ideas for writing even more poems!

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