The Weight of the World

The weight of the World is crashing down
And it seems like there no one but me aroun'
The  weight of the World hurts
Causing us to kick up dirt
The weight of the World is heavy
One that can't stay steady
The wieght of the World wonders
So why don't we plunder
The weight of the World won't change
Its something that's strange
The weight of the World is self owned
Something that causes our minds to be blowned



Oh look at that! You have an 82.9% similarity with Lewis Carroll! He's my favorite! I'm not sure if it was intentional, but the last word should be blown- since that is already the past tense of the word blow. I really liked the rhyming and the patterns within the piece, it's musical almost.

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