Weight Falling

Mon, 04/08/2013 - 22:06 -- serbec

as the pain grew in her chest
she began to get obsessed
as she hid from them all
the weight began to fall
with every calorie she would eat
came a feeling of defeat
from the pounds she ran
as she worked out a new plan
to make it ten more pounds then stop
but every goal she would swap
with one much less than the last
because she was haunted by her past
now as the years went by
there were more reasons to cry
and as that battle kept on
that girl was very soon, gone.

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