Water

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75051
United States
32° 43' 55.5492" N, 96° 59' 26.592" W

In the water we can put our thoughts

Not just in our minds.

Our thoughts can change us

And they can change the water

Let’s say we drown ourselves In the ocean,

Our thoughts drown themselves with us.

But some may stay in the atmosphere

Usually the most important ones

Are the ones that stay and

Pass out to someone else.

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