Walls Destroyed by The Piercing Cold Blue Eyes

Tue, 01/06/2015 - 02:14 -- suzitax

In a corner trapped by walls.
The feeling of peace fondles my soul.
Freedom and peace I'm relaxed and patient.
But then...
He walks the corner; eyes blue as ice, a face as Innocent as a child's.
Innocence? What am I thinking.

He walks the corner with pride and love
Which makes my heart beat double its pace.
Making my mind jump from one thought to another.
My heart feelong a million things at once until he's gone.
Its gone.

He passes me with a wave hello.
As innocent as a child stealing candy from the kitchen Jar.
With a smile that is to be implanted through my head the rest of the day.
He's gone but he's not.
My walls are already bulldozed down
With a long process its time to build it up again.
A picture in my head that makes me loose my peace and calm.
But still, in the end
I become inpatient until the day that I will see him again.

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