Walls Up

I spent many years
Building up my fortress.
Building it up strong ,
strong enough to withstand
An atomic bombing.
But I did not account for rain.
All it took was one rainfall
To tumble it all down.
You were the rainfall,
And now my security has withered away.
 i am left vulnerable.
Alone and scared.


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