Thu, 12/20/2012 - 18:05 -- LV

Hot date
Not only turned into date rape
Hot date also invited
Clinic date
That consist of
Thursdays October 25, November 1st, 8th, 15th and the 29th,
December 6th, 13th, and the 20th
20 he is
Concentrated minds
Devoted on what lies between her thighs
Speaking with his eyes
He counted
The way she pulled her hair behind her left ear 13 times
Beyond the stage of mesmerized
Paralyzed is the best word to describe his soul.....
So desolate and cold
A soul mate wouldn't be able to break this da vinci code
So cocky! and bold!
But yet precise
Hesitation is like fear
So fear dears to reside in his eyes
Hesitating he despise
Crystal clear this mastermind
Has done his deviled
With pleasure and pride
Please take heed and be eased
To jump in the ride
Majority of the time it's just a bribe
For those of you who can identify
It's okay to cry
For those of you that can not see eye to eye
With the ones that already cried
Just a few words of advice
Try to avoid these try of guys.



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