The View


United States
29° 17' 53.6352" N, 98° 29' 42.8028" W

Day can’t compare to thee’s simple beauty,

Now seeing you puts my mind right at ease,

Thoughts go in without my authority,

You are a mystery from what I see,

I look forward to seeing you each night,

You have made me fall in love like no other,

Having a companion gives me delight,

With you I am better and much wiser,

You are like a diamond the way you glow,

I can even compare you to white gold,

A spontaneous thing can even show,

That being a shooting star that’s untold,

Leaving would give me eternal sadness,

But I know it won’t last with spaces madness.

This poem is about: 
Our world


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