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Cardboard cutouts,
plastic smiles.
lost romantics,
such denial.
naive glances,
false control.
unwritten pages,
empty console.
a candles glow,
black and white.
blurring stars nothings right.
a hearts lone beat,
a dim lit room.
peace and hope,
let love comsume

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RebeccaYSPerez

This poemw as so beautiful and your rhyming was excellent. I would love to give you more feedback, would you mind at all?

Becca.

ktwilkins247

Yes I would love more feed back! Thank you!!

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