Until Im Gone

I'll stop loving you when the diamonds no longer sparkle

and the fire doesn't burn

And the water doesn't freeze when the temperature is low

When my bones no longer snap

And my eyes no longer see

When my heart is so weak that it will stop to beat

 

This poem is about: 
Me

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