It was love

At first site


So vulnerable

So resilient

So powerful


She has my eyes

She has his smile

She is rain

On parched earth


She has his wild temper

And my calm focus

A most perfect

Combination of two Imperfect people


Without her the world

Would hold no meaning

Without her her sweet light

The world Would be dark

And so unbearably cold


Her hair golden

Like sunlight

Her eyes blue sparkling

Like a calm ocean

And full of life


Laughing at the mundane

Enchanted by the unremarkable

Her fervor for this life is



My love for her


Will be unmatched 


My unplanned daughter

My everything  


This poem is about: 
My family
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