UnKind Love

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Leave me the truth, I can handle the pain

You’ve done nothing but wreck me, it was all so vain.

The thought of you is a dreadful spin

into a deep, dark, den, the world I live in.

 

So innocent, so fresh

My heart was so pure.

No evil, no hatred

Now im alone, and insecure.

 

You showed me to love, you’re remembered for that

But I don’t want you now, don’t ever come back.

You made up your mind, and forgot to include me

now our love is destroyed, now theres nothing but debris.  

 

So real, so alive

My first love, the scars deep

unstable, unloved

my hearts not yours to keep 

 

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