Ungratefulness

The boy wakes up in bed

The girl wakes up from the ground

The boy jumps in the warm shower

The girl gets in the river instead

 

The boy puts on his fresh clean shirt

The girl picks up her damp clothes from a river of dirt

 

He looks in the fridge, not the food he wants

She eats old meat, never heard of a restuarant

 

He's not in the mood

She just needs food

 

The boy lays on his couch, and watches a show

The girls grabs her bucket of water to use, she has a sprained elbow

 

He complains of the weather

She holds it all together

 

There's a delivery that has arrived, he's excited

She kills a bird, that's food provided, she's delighted

 

The boy goes to bed, his day was so boring

The girl clears the dirt, to lay as it's pouring

This poem is about: 
Our world

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