Under

Underneath a deep dark sea
Bright light is blinding me.
I have a tale I'd rather not tell
So instead the water laps at me,
Coldly flowing with the secrets
That pull me under,
 
under.
 
Up ahead a storm has started,
Lighting flashing
Sharks and minows are caliding
Ruby red water.
 
under.
 
The torrent is calling me home,
The heavens have opened above 
And hell has come below
And all I want is to close my eyes.
 
under.

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