Uncontrollable Journey

 

Have you ever had the fear

of losing control over your fate?

You are happy about the way things are going

under your control

That as soon as it’s lost,

it all turns for the worst and is 

Uncontrollable

 

What if life without being controlled 

would end up the same way as if it was planned for.

Nothing would change.

When it is 

Uncontrollable

 

It’s hard to tell for sure

if the tables turn

and power is turn over to destiny itself,

that it would all be the same.

Yet our decisions steer the course of our fate

and appear to be

Uncontrollable

Would we be able to evade the consequences?

If we steer?

Or would fate and destiny do the talking?

 

It’s hard to believe that one has total control 

over the other.

Or one or the other doesn’t have total control at all.

They actually work hand in hand. 

One cant work without the other.

One leads to the other.

To each other,

one is the salt to the soup,

the jam to the bread,

the spice to the tea.

They complete each other.

They both take part in the journey of life as if lovers,

without being altered in any way.

 

All on their own they are faint flames

that aren’t able to withstand the storms of adversity.

Like a match and gasoline

both are useless and controllable apart

But one spark can cause an uncontainable explosion.

Posing them to be 

Uncontrollable

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