Your breathless, urgent style reminds me of Frank O'Hara's "Lunch Poems," particularly in how you capture the electric energy of infatuation through specific, intimate details like "your ratty car" and shared passwords. The way you alternate between declarations of desire and vulnerable questions creates a beautiful tension, similar to how Anne Carson explores love and longing in "The Beauty of the Husband." Your use of casual, conversational language combined with deep emotional yearning ("I want you to let me take care of me") echoes Ada Limón's ability to make everyday moments feel transcendent. The progression from rebellious joy ("do donuts in a parking garage") to tender care ("make you tea like i used to") shows sophisticated emotional range - keep nurturing this authentic voice that captures both the exhilaration and uncertainty of love.