That tree

Wed, 12/02/2015 - 12:58 -- samyatx

The other day, I saw a dead tree,
It’s branches broken and its roots free.
It had fallen down in a storm the previous night,
Knocked over by the wind and all its might.

No one else noticed it lying on the ground,
But I can say for sure that it made a sound.
For I saw it, and it managed to change me 
Because I knew someone would see me like I saw that tree.

This poem is about: 
Me

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Jasmin Dowling

I love this! This is incredible

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