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A Capricorn under Saturn
Ambitious, natural like earth's soil
Beautiful without effects and powders
Humble, do tumble, I mumble under my breath
waiting to be discovered
A diamond under pressure, heart so strong, no need for a pacer
Non-complacent, ambiguous, bits and pieces of soul plus mind
Stand tall, keep soaring, leaving the past behind
Cherry Blossom blooming in the spring, wonderful.
Shining smile facing the moon, truthful.
A mountain that never falls.
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