Tranquility

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92870
United States
33° 52' 48.8712" N, 117° 51' 37.6092" W

Velvet mist
Across the serene blue surface
Soft steam
Uninviting warmth telling me to jump in
Silent clarity
Diving in, water rushing around me rippling the un disturbed water
Not breathing, not seeing, barely hearing
I'm at peace when I am underwater.

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