Touch

she sat there with sadness that filled the whole room. i knew she was hurting and i wanted to help her. i had never felt pain like hers ,but i knew how pain felt. pain is a dark bitter shadow that will take the very joy and life out of every thing that is filled with hope and purpose. it will take your soul and drag it to the blackess black of black. but how could i help she wouldn't let me come near her." i just want to help ". i said "please." she turned around with  a great longing to loved. i moved closer and felt the electric attraction. she said nothing but i knew. i felt her pain. and when our lps touched for the first time she cried. "i love you" .

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