A touch

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When you touch my shoulder I feel a burst of emotions.

My voice changes like inhaling helium.

My hands and legs start to dance.

My brain freezes.

My heart stops beating.

My eyes turn black.

My brain unfreezes.

My heart starts beating again.

My eyes start to see light again.

I see. I see......a bright white smile looking back at me.

I close my eyes.

Then I feel someone touch my shoulder. 

I open my eyes to find out it was YOU.

 

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