Tornado man

loving you is like burning my
finger on the ice maker
the very machine that burnt me
produces the ice needed to numb the pain
I fell in love with your shadow
memorized its every perfection
I worshiped your soles
         stay, play, they say,
         I stay, you say
         away away
my tears are grains of salt
     in wounds like molded bread
     You care.
not me

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