TORN DOWN

My sweet world now bitter
And upside down it's turning
My joy now my greatest sorrow
The cure i had now poison
And to my grave it wants me
My relieve just but my pain
Lonely and low I am
Am no longer me
My gloomy face tells it all
Am torn down, left to succumb

This poem is about: 
Me

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