Tonight

Tonight was perfect,
unable to describe.
I was so nervous,
so was he....
maybe?
even though he may deny it,
I could tell.
I was nervous and so was he.....

Comments

jwiener

12 years ago

This poem is so simple, but tells a larger story, and the way you wrote it makes the reader feel like they are in your mind as well.

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