Together As One

You tore my heart to pieces
Left it empty and broken
You tried to fix it with lies and deceit
I tried to heal it with bitter thoughts and words
None of this helped but made it feel worse

I tried friends and money
All the joys of the world
But none of this lasted
They all faded away
And there was me my heart torn and empty

It seemed like everything I tried just tore my heart more
Made me feel worse.
Then I tried God, forgiveness, and love
And there was my heart together as one
But this time instead of fading away
My heart was as if never broken before

Sometimes I look back and see my torn and empty heart
And get filled with hatred and more
But then I remember
I have forgiven
And now I show love
Because now it doesn’t matter
Because...
My heart is together as one

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MVP-Most Valuable Poet

life is about forgiving and moving forward

beautiful poem that expresses much emotions

like the rhythm and flow of the poem

keep writing

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