Tip-Toeing In Dance Shoes

I wish I could dance

with my hips I'd slowly sway

and display this ache ache in my soul

Sometimes---I feel so torn

I want to bend...and leap...and delicately spin

on anxious tip toes

and reach out to touch your heart

Make you feel what I feel

Grab you by the hand

and take you on this rhythmic journey

Dance...with...me

Toss me...and catch me

Twist and turn me until I'm dizzy in

your supposed love

Show me how you feel

on our very own empty dance floor

Come on, dance with me

 

 

Comments

lizardoa21

Always wanted to be able to dance always ahd two left feet.. Great work a lot of emotion behind this piece and just a beautiful flow its almost hypnotizing the imagery plus the flow. i imagined dance music as i read this XD 

I Am That Girl

Thank you so much, I'm glad you enjoyed my piece...I'll have to go and check out your work too

lizardoa21

ahh just joined the power poetry team recently havnt had a chance to put up too much work so just give me a day or two X3 ill put up a lot for you to read and can't wait to hear from you then.

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