Thoughts From A Balcony

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29445
United States
33° 0' 9.4068" N, 79° 59' 51.3312" W

Thoughts from a balcony
She’s my heart, my world, my life!
How can it feel if my heart is dancing on a knife?
She loves me… She loves me not!
Is this a lesson I need to be taught?
This is an addicting drug, I just cant stop!
The feeling of the world underneath me while I’m on top!
Could it be?
That her hatred is coming down on me?
But what did I do?
Maybe not as much as I wanted to!
My mind is gone!
An empty world that I’m no longer on!
Thoughts from a balcony!

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