Thoughts

What makes me flawless, you can't watch
What makes me flawless, you can't touch
What makes me flawless are the thoughts in my skull
That dance to a melody that's filled with awe
That builds a world around these foot-tapping jumping thoughts 
for all to see when I let them swing out my jaw 
But some people don't feel awe at all
when they watch my thoughts dance at the ball
With a melody filled with awe
They seem to acquire a face that just screams, "this is bizarre!"
You see
They saw a huge flaw
In the thoughts that dance in my skull
They don't agree with them at all
But that fine
I don't mind at all
People will always find flaws
But you see even diamonds have flaws
and just like a diamond I am flawlessly flawed

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Grant-Grey Porter Hawk Guda

Powerful expression! 

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