There you were

There you were,

You were justy standing there,

Quiet,

Not really saying a word,

But to be honest you don't really need to,

Cause your eyes,

Your eyes they do that for you,

Even though you stand there and smile all nice

So nice and sweetly,

Your eyes they stare,

They do they stare so

So truely deeply,

And well there you were.............

Comments

jwiener

This poem is so sweet, and really has the feeling of true love. I loved how you talked about the person's eyes, because you give the reader such a clear image, and it seems as if they are going through this discovery with you.

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